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You need to work on your graphics. They're a tad on the lame side.
And the plot seems a bit jumpy. It goes from one situation to another. Try focusing on one plot like the forum thing. That was funny, i guess.
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You need to work on your graphics. They're a tad on the lame side.
And the plot seems a bit jumpy. It goes from one situation to another. Try focusing on one plot like the forum thing. That was funny, i guess.
I improved the graphics alot from the first episode. I also let Loup write the script. Thanks for your review though.
Meh.
Not too fond of stick figures.
Animation is good but needs work. The end part where the bullets were on top of the guys arm, that was bad. Fix up layer positioning.
i already have fixed it will resubit or update when there is some more of it.
haha
Short but funny. But wasn't that entertaining... let's just say it's not an animation to remember you by.
ok thanks, as I said I was bored when I made this so I knocked it up quickly. I have made better things but just havent posted them yet. (and thanks for not being abusive. Unlike some of these bastards)
not bad
But too short. And you shouldn't have traced the original scene. Try and make your own stuff.
You did a great job with the graphics though.
whach my other movies plz, they're not traced and search for teh knife jam im in it
thx for review
Nice work.
I'm a little confused, but I understand the message you're trying to express, and I really like it.
The graphics arn't bad... I can see they required effort which is a good thing. I see too often flashes that have a few scribles and a stick figure. As you keep using flash you will get better at that.
Sound was okay-ish. You shouldn't have had the heart beat going continuously... only in parts where it would be relevant. Or at least turn the volume down on it. I dunno... the heart beat seemed to irritate me a little. :p
Your style is unique, there's no doubt about it. I'll put you in my fav's list. Hope to see more from you! :)
thanks for the lovely review! your words are true, I tried to keep the movie intense and human, the irritation was one of the things I wanted people to feel too :D mwahaha
thanks for adding me to your favs :D and thanks again for the review ~.~
LMAO!
This was fucking funny man!
Graphics were fairly crappy though... work on it.
Nice job!
hehe thanks XD I didnt spend quality time making this movie so I didn't worry about the graphics much, tried to keep things simple :P
Simply amazing animation.
The only downside for me was the whole plot... I guess i'm more of a shoot 'em up fan than a mystical/friendly creature type.
The graphics were stunning... the water, superb. A shame you need a bunch of 3d programs for that stuff, though...
Over all a great animation. But I honestly can't see how this is number one on the portal.
The only 3D element in the entire movie is one tree in the tree-jumping sequence. It's the red-brown tree that the camera swings around. It sticks out like a sore thumb because it's the only piece of 3D.
The water is entirely hand-drawn frame-by-frame. Matter of fact, I'm flattered that you think "a bunch of 3d programs" generated it for me...
anyway, thanks for the review
Stupid repetative bullshit.
Was the soul purpose of making this ridiculous animation to piss people off? It worked... nice work. lol
Anyway, this is a peice of crap. Someone said the graphics were good... why!? Because they're not stick figures? Give me a break. A 5 year old child could do better than the shit this animation displays.
BLAM!
Hahahahehehahehahehehehahahahehehehahehehahehehahehehahehaha.... Wow, you are very clever (yeah right). You say nice work yet you give a 0 overall. then lol (hence the above laughing). I saw nothing worth laughing at but you.
Anyways, I have no idea what you are talking about. I did not display any shit in this animation. That would be wrong in so many countless and different ways. Please go back and see it again, for I do believe you saw the wrong animation. This is for Internal Fires 3....Get your facts straight.
P.S. A 5 year old can barely hold a crayon. just thought you might want to know that before you go around with that untrue opinion you gave in this review that was meant for some other animation. No problem though. Next time, just get the animation right to the review.
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